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i really like where this is going but i really would like to not override the track with extremely reverby effects and leads. the progression is okay for like 16 bars but it gets repetitive after a while, it really is like 4 keys playing over and over. i would also improve the kick to lead balance, i know synthwave doesnt need powerful and hard drums but this track really needs it.
the overall structure is kinda boring sorry its like drop-break-drop-break over and over, only at 2:00 you did a build-up but it doesnt sound climaxing. i would add a longer buildup to make the structure full
times where to improve on:
00:40 this break needs some snares and dry uplifters to fill, it really feels empty
01:12 the climax is satisfying to hear but the whole track there just gets extremely muddy because you added so many reverb on the impact fx
01:40ish you added so much cutoff to the lead i can barely hear other sounds, i would shorten the midi.

Now not to be cruel i write the things what i liked about this track
The overall feel really fits the title, now i know many producers do like to make these type of tracks but yours is more legit.
The gritty buzz lead which starts at 00:22 it really adds the filth and greasyness to the track.
The effects sound pretty nice, but if they were dryier with the reverb i would like them more
The pitched impacts are a little detail but they add so much when the main part of the song is finishing
Thats all from me

the kicks are really not fitting. it sounds more djjaner than gibb lol. also i give you an advice. turn down the lead at the second half by an octave

Irishtoner responds:

at least i have tried something.

damn thats one hell of a track.

Quarl responds:

Thank you cry :)

Yea youve improved dude. The track has a start and finish now!
I would add more grit to it, some classic neurofunk bass
Im still hearing a repeatable melody, but youve tried to make it more diverse by adding more sounds with different tones and such. (which is a way to do it too, but its not that effective)
I really like the transition at 03:25 simple but cool sounding (also that part sounds really balanced)
add boosting the lower eq (i dont hear much of a bass there)

Oh, and the beat got too much reverb.
imma scout u

i hear lots of familiar sounds troughout the entire track and actually it kinda impressed me.
not to mention that the track is probably heavily inspired from waterflame and its like 70% serum (which i use mostly too :D ) it kinda gives the catchy and funky vibe.
really fun track to listen. looking for more :)

Preds responds:

Yeah! I used a lot of Serum on this one. Thank you!

i agree with patrystyk
you cant make the lead THAT loud. i cant hear any drums and it gets boring after 1 or 2 minutes cuz of hearing that same sound over and over.
melody isnt off and it sounds really fine tbh but i would like to hear more of the drums since the track is supposed to be: Drum and Bass
gl

Cynzahd responds:

Thanks! I'll try to fix the errors on new songs, yesterday i uploaded one if you want to check it.

This sounds like Hammerschmidt for some reason
diggin them dark vibes

sounds like halloween track lol
i like them vibes
goodbye then

Dude the groove is real

the bitcrushed noise with the chips...
i dig it

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